Requited Or Unrequited

Romantic relationships (or romantically tinged ones) in serial storytelling can create problems and challenges for the storytellers. “Unrelieved sexual tension” (as it often gets called) can be used to generate plenty of drama in stories, and when it occurs between recurring (or at least significant) characters, the storyteller can have a lot of options.

The archetype of the Lovers specifically involves relationship. But the point about the relationship is that it is not merely about sexual lust, although physical attraction can be a (powerful) element. Instead, for the archetype to function, the relationship needs to be or to be growing toward a balanced partnership, demonstrating respect and appreciation going in both directions.

In recent years, however, there has been a tendency in some storytellers (particularly those writing for television) to believe that resolving the sexual tension, letting a couple come together fully as partners, would kill the dramatic tension between these principal characters. The reason for avoiding a relationship “resolution” is given in one word: “Moonlighting.”

Shepherd and Willis of Moonlighting

 

But long before the show Moonlighting hit the air, the concept of a romantic couple working together to solve mysteries charmed audiences in a series of stories and films. Nick and Nora Charles romped through stories, playfully bantering as they worked their way to the stories’ ends. A couple, a married couple – definitely a case of requited love.

Nick and Nora Charles

Nick and Nora Charles

 

So, if it is possible to make a requited relationship work in a series of stories, what should the storyteller choose: requited or unrequited?

Some series start with an already established relationship, definitely invoking the prototype of Nick and Nora.

 

Hart to Hart, for instance, featured a wealthy couple who are shown as having a well-balanced relationship. As marital partners they demonstrate genuine love and respect for each other. That respect continues over into their crime-fighting activities.

Hart to Hart

Hart to Hart

Other relationships are presented not as an established partnership, but rather as one that is destined to become such.

John and Aeryn of Farscape

John and Aeryn of Farscape

 

In the sceince fiction series, Farscape, the relationship between John Crichton and Aeryn Sun explodes from the very beginning. She beats him up. She’s a pilot and commando and he’s a sceintist astronaut. But from the moment the audience sees John’s reaction to this impressive woman, they know this pair will eventually work their way to a requited relationship. Dramatic tension does not disappear between the two: they often have different opinions about solutions to problems, and circumstances around them also keep pulling them apart.

Working toward a functional partnership has been used in other series, to good effect.

 

In the series Remington Steele,  private investigator Laura Holt kept running into chauvinistic dismissal because she was a woman. (Hey, it was the ’80s). So she created a fictional boss, “Remington Steele.” One day, by accident, a charming con-man and thief stepped into the alias and once Steele had a public face, Laura couldn’t get rid of him. Because of his (seemingly) unrequited attraction to Laura, the (now known as) Steele more or less reforms his ways, and works to learn her business, to really become her equal partner.

Laura Holt and Remington Steele

Laura Holt and Remington Steele

Another couple who work their way toward requited affections are Fox Mulder and Dana Scully of The X-Files.

Mulder and Scully

Mulder and Scully

 

This pair begins with a level of professional equality. They are both FBI agents in their own rights. Mulder is also an eccentric genius, while Scully is a brilliant trained scientist and medical doctor. Mulder’s acceptance of outre possiblities gets balanced by Scully’s insistence upon hard evidence and strict science. That dichotomy creates a tension that carries stories a long way. In the meantime, the fact that Scully grows to understand Mulder and he is never intimidated by Scully’s intellect creates a strong bond between them.

Understanding between participants in a relationship is a very powerful glue. It can be used in many ways by storytellers. In Burn Notice, understanding acts as a very important catalyst between Michael Westen and Fiona Glenanne.

Fiona and Michael

Fiona and Michael

 

Their story together begins before the series starts. They had been lovers, but parted. Michael states it was to protect her when his cover was blown, but as things unfold it is clear to the audience that another reason was that she was getting “too close.” Fiona understands Michael very well. She challenges him when he’s inclined to let expedience supercede morality. For a spy, even a burned one, issues of the morailty of immeidate actions can be tricky. There is a definite tendency to let the ends justify the means. But for Michael, if he stays on that path he runs the danger of becoming just like his souless mentor, Larry.

Larry and Michael

Larry and Michael

 

Fiona serves as Michael’s moral compass, and he has grown to realize how necessary she is to him, causing their intimate relationship to re-establish itself. Requited.

So what about unrequited relationships? Isn’t it possible to sustain a sort of romantic tension between a couple without their bringing it into the open, even consumating it? After all, many critics in looking back at Moonlighting feel that the storytellers for the show should never have taken that route.

Shepherd and Willis of Moonlighting

Cybill Shepherd and Bruce Willis star in Moonlighting.

 

If ever there was a character in the realm of fiction who seemed immune to the hold of romantic relationship, it is that of Sherlock Holmes. Yet even his creator, Arthur Conan Doyle, could not resist the lure of romance. He chose to make it “unrequited” (as in unconsumated, or even openly acknowledged), but for Sherlock there was always only one woman, The Woman, Irene Adler. The storytellers of the modern version hold to this.

Sherlock and Irene

Sherlock and Irene

 

The power and attraction between this pair is a matching of intellect and understanding. They challenge each other as no two other people do. Yet, they hold off from each other, standing on opposited sides of an ethical fence (among other things). For the audience, the question hovers as to just how strong that fence really is.

Another famous literary couple who held themselves at a distance for some time is amateur detective Lord Peter Wimsey and novelist Harriet Vane.

Lord Peter and Harriet Vane

Lord Peter and Harriet Vane

Author Dorothy L. Sayers created a “relationship” for these two where once he encountered Harriet – on trial for murder – Lord Peter was entirely smitten with her. He had to suffer the pangs of unrequited love for a few novels, because, although she enjoyed the intellectual partnership with Lord Peter, Harriet deeply resented the weight of gratitude on her emotions. Eventually this hindrence to requitement got worked out, but not without several challenges to the relationship.

What does all this say for a relationship that lingers in the in-between zone, such as that on Castle?

Beckett and Castle

Kate Beckett and Richard Castle

Like Lord Peter, novelist Rick Castle was speedily smitten with Detective Kate Beckett. As a professional detective, Beckett frequently chafes at Castle’s flights of fancy. However, he also brings attentive observation and excellent insight to the table. As with Lord Peter and Harriet or Sherlock and Irene, Beckett and Castle have encountered an intellectual equal and partner in the other person. The show’s storytellers have (over most of four seasons) avoided bringing requitement of love entirely out into the open, but the health of this relathionship is quite evident. Genuine respect and trust exists between Beckett and Castle, and has been there from the start.

Can there be problems when love is requited between characters? Of course. Just look at what happenes between the principals in Camelot.

The lovers of Camelot

Guinevere, Lancelot and Arthur

 

Arthur and Guinevere have respect and affection between them, but not passion. Lancelot and Guinevere have passion, but her marriage to Arthur prohibits acknowledging that passion. And of course, the affection and respect both have for Arthur holds them back. But the moment they consumate their passion, openly requite their love, everything crumbles around them, and the very thing that drew them to each other drives them apart. They basically lost respect for themselves  and could not sustain the relationship.

So, what really did go wrong with the characters on Moonlighting? As we have seen, there are a multitude of ways to handle requited relationships in serial storyteliing. More than simply being mismatched (as Crichton and Aeryn are, or Laura and Remington, or Beckett and Castle), Maddie and David began from a place of disresepct. She was a high-class model and he was a blue-collar gumshoe. Witty banter and one-upsmanship flew between them, and the audience was dazzled by it. But under the “unrelieved sexual tension” between them was very little solid groundwork of respect and understanding.

The power of a relationship, whether openly requited or not, lies in a partnership of respect and understanding. Sex alone is not a good glue.

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Up The River Without A Clue

ABC launched The River with a deal of hype, possibly because Spielberg has put his name on the project as an Executive Producer. It features lush scenery not often seen on series television and an ominous tone of supernatural horror hovers over it all. The triggering event for the series involves the mysterious disappearance of Dr. Emmet Cole (played by Bruce Greenwood), a world-famous explorer who for 20 years (or more) has brought the far corners of the world to television audiences. He’s been missing six months at the series’ start and his son Lincoln (Joe Anderson) has concluded his father (from whom he is estranged) is dead.

Dr. Emmet Cole in The RiverBut a beacon signal has gone off at last and Lincoln’s mother Tess (Leslie Hope) wants to mount an expedition to go rescue Emmet. The catch is they have to take a film crew in order to fund this trip.

Okay, you say. Could be interesting. Mysterious Amazon setting, family quest, supernatural tales. All workable, right?

Well … not exactly.

In The Scribbler’s Guide to the Land of Myth, in discussing franchise storytelling, I present what I call the Constant Jeopardy Syndrome.

If the premise of the franchise involves a major problem for your main character (or characters), and if the overall story ends when the character solves the problem, you are dealing with the Constant Jeopardy Syndrome.

The River fits this template. There are certain problems that come from using the CJS as the frame for your stories. And already, after just three episodes, some of these problems are starting to surface.

First off, there is the set-up for the series. It isn’t just that a team of people are on a quest and if they find Emmet the stories “end.” It is that the show’s creators have committed the audience to the knowledge that what we are seeing is “found footage,” which implies the questers do not make it back.

Cast of The RiverObviously, the show’s storytellers want to make it a scary show. The “found footage” aspect implies disaster waiting ahead and we are to be anxious about the future of the characters. But this is where the problems of the Constant Jeopardy Syndrome come into play.

There’s the dangling carrot of Emmet Cole’s mysterious fate. Of course, we can’t have the questers find him very quickly. But he cannot be perpetually unattainable. At some point, the audience will want to see the questers’ perseverence rewarded in some fashion.

But say they do find Emmet? Does that necessarily put the story at an end?

Not exactly. As it happens, Emmet chose to lose himself in an “uncharted region” of the Amazon River Basin. The intrepid hunters are sailing up a tributary that is “not on any charts” (even though it does have a name). A storyteller could keep them lost in these mysterious regions where supernatural elements run free.

However, the show has a limited cast. There is no cannon fodder, there are no “redshirts.” In the first hour they killed off a couple of people to dramatize the threat the team is heading into — but now, three episodes in, they are pretty much set. This becomes a problem, in storytelling, keeping the audience hooked. The audience is outside the story. We know it is a series. In spite of the storytelling conceit of the “found footage” and its implications, we know the story “will go on.” For the characters, they believe they could die at any moment — they’ve seen it happen. But for the audience, we can guess that from this point on, none of the regulars will die. There’s no way to add in new characters, and we know this set are regulars.

The storytellers are working very hard to make this a scary show, tinged with horror. Emmet’s quest to find “the magic” out there sets the tone for this. The doctor’s dabbling with native supernatural phenomena gives the questers a lot to deal with as they go along.

Emmet explores magicThe show unfolds the backstories of the characters. But they come with plot-necessitated aspects, which means we will see some very specific behavior from each as the series progresses.

Son Lincoln is a big problem: he didn’t want to come on this quest. He was estranged from his father and has eschewed Emmet’s interests.

Emmet's son LincolnLincoln has studied medicine, meaning he went in the opposite direction his father took pursuing magic. But the circumstances of the journey are forcing Lincoln to engage with Emmet’s quest. And already, in just three episodes there are implications that Lincoln is by nature the shaman his father wants to become.

The “jobs” of each of the characters are already getting too entrenched. Tess, Emmet’s wife, drives the quest forward. We’re not entirely sure why, since Emmet went off on his quest without her.

Emmet's wife TessAnd then there is the young woman-child Jahel (played by Paulina Gaitan), who speaks only in Spanish although it is quite clear she fully comprehends English. She also seems to know all the names and lore of the supernatural things in this uncharted region.

JahelThe cameraman, AJ (Shaun Parkes) and their security man Captain Kurt Brynildson (Thomas Kretschmann) don’t really have an emotional investment in the quest. Well, except for the fact that Kurt has a satellite phone he uses to contact the outside world. And it would seem his hidden mission is to keep the questers and Emmet from finding “the Source.” Lena (Eloise Mumford) is looking for her father, the only close friend Emmet took with him. Lena is the techno-info encyclopedia for the series. She also seems to know far more about Emmet’s recent choices than his family do. Jahel’s father (Daniel Zacapa) keeps things running. And then there is Clark (Paul Blackthorne), the producer, a long friend of Emmet’s and laboring under an apparently unrequited love for Tess.

Where can you take these relationships? It’s hard to see the growth room. And Kurt reeks of Dr. Smith (from Lost in Space). Let’s throw him overboard now.

Three episodes in, and I’m not certain how they can sustain this. Without the threat of genuine disaster (from the audience’s point of view), the scary factor dwindles. Things like this work in movies, because we accept the storytelling convention that a movie has an end. The convention of a series is that it is open-ended.

Mechanically the series has some additional stumbling blocks.

Joe Anderson tends to mumble in his line delivery. This is an big problem because Lincoln is (so far in 2 out of 3 cases) the one who has the insight to the solution of the current problem. It would be nice if we could understand him better.

The locked-down cameras on the boat are a bit contrived. Particularly the one focused on the prow, because that has become a favorite “private” conversation point. The conventions of this particular show are setting in too fast.

This is not to fault the actors, mind you. Although I complained about Anderson’s enunciation, he plays his part well — even though the scripts require him go from scientific skeptic to insightful believer at a twist of the plot.

The concept of the series also strains our credibility a little bit. In an age of global satellite surveillence they require us to believe in a vast “uncharted region.” In three episodes, we’ve apparently covered only 12 days or so. But I’m starting to wonder — what’s fueling this ship? It sat abandoned for six months, and they got it running again. But what about fuel supplies? Energy sources for all the equipment they have with them? I’m guessing their cameras are all digital, but they still have to be charged and the data transfered to … something. And food? It’s going to take suspense out of things if they have to make regular supply runs. But the characters (so far) aren’t questioning these things.

After all, “there’s magic out there!” (Emmet’s catch phrase.)

I also have some deeper questions about what this show is saying. Emmet is evidently on an obsessive spiritual quest. He is looking for the Source, which apparently can only be found by a select few. It is hidden, guarded, protected from all but the initiates. It’s rather like ancient mystery religions, or Gnosticism. Additionally, Emmet left his whole family, close friends, everything, without explanation, taking one friend with him into danger. It’s a very selfish act on his part and leaves the audience with very little sympathy for his personal quest. No matter how wonderful the anticipated end of his quest is, is it worth the damage he has done to those closest to him?

All this leaves an impression that the storytellers are willing to consider any spiritual quest in the same light: selfish, harmful to those around the quester, all for obscure purposes.

The incidental stories, however, tend to run counter to that trend. The solutions have come through a willingness to act on compassion or self-sacrifice. These qualities are seemingly rewarded by the supernatural powers of the region.

Again — how long can the storytellers sustain this? The frame of “found footage” implies a failed quest. Yet the structures of the set-up indicate no regular character is in danger of being killed. They could all go crazy, of course, but would we want to watch that?

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The Aspiring Writer – Shadow

Well, I’ve finally finished the Traditional Archetype series of videos for “The Aspiring Writer”. Below is the last of them, focusing on the Shadow figure. It’s been fun making these, especially as I decided to give my Aspiring Writer a progressive arc of competency.

I’ve been considering doing more videos like this to illustrate other writing points. If you have suggestions that would interest you, let me know.

And I hope you enjoy this one.

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Anti-Heroes, Shadows and Villains

When it comes to creating villains for stories, we can flippantly go for the quick stereotype: the leering, mustache-twirling baddie, who spews out his evil laugh.

Snively WhiplashBut if we really want our stories to have depth, we need to go deeper than a two-dimensional cartoon character.

Our first option for villains is an anti-hero. The pattern for an anti-hero is one that runs in the opposite direction of a hero. You can have a character like Colonel Nicholson in The Bridge On the River Kwai: he doesn’t see himself as a villain.

Colonel Nicholson in The Bridge on the River Kwai

And yet when viewed objectively, each of his choices takes him further and further from the position of a hero – until the moment comes when he realizes he has done everything the Japanese wanted. The ambiguity of the Colonel’s intentions in contrast with the results for the over-all war effort create a tragic coloration to the story. Unlike the Colonel, a figure like Macbeth is much more committed to his downward path.

Macbeth? But isn’t he a “tragic” hero? What about that?

Tragedy covers a variety of storylines, the consistent element being the downward trend of the plot.

Romeo & JulietRomeo is a tragic figure, because the circumstances around him drive his story downward to death. No one in their right mind (except perhaps Juliet’s cousin Tybalt) would consider Romeo a “villain.” The same could be said of Hamlet.

HamletAlthough Hamlet’s mad act creates problems for Claudius, the prince is not a villain, not even in Claudius’ book. An obstacle, certainly, but not a villain. But Macbeth really is making villainous choices.

MacbethMacbeth and his wife are tempted by the prophecy of the witches, and they give in to the temptation, choosing murder as a means of progress. Continuing with a selection of Shakespearean models, Richard III also chooses murder for his method to “success.”

Richard IIIMurder as a choice is a useful sign that a villain is at work. But what are our other options as storytellers?

Another popular route in storytelling is to use the Shadow archetype. As I point out in The Scribbler’s Guide to the Land of Myth, the Shadow has a close connection to the Hero of a story. The Shadow usually represents qualities the Hero rejects in him- or herself.

The Witch of the West is Dorothy's ShadowFor instance, the Wicked Witch of the West is Dorothy’s Shadow. Dorothy wanted to get out and see the world, but the Witch is secure in her castle. Dorothy collects a community of friends around herself, while the Witch rules over soldiers who fear and hate her. The contrast between the choices the Hero makes and those the Shadow makes can bring clear cut conflict to the story.

Voldemort is a villainVoldemort in the Harry Potter stories is a sharp example of the Shadow figure as villain. He is in so many ways everything Harry is not. Harry encourages his friends in their abilities, Voldemort quashes his followers. Harry chooses love while Voldemort chooses negation.

We must remember, however, that although the Shadow represents aspects of the Self that the Hero rejects from his or her own identity, a Shadow is not automatically a villain.

Shadows aren't necessarily bad.For instance, in Miss Congeniality, Cheryl Frasier, Miss Rhode Island, is the Shadow to our Hero, FBI agent Gracie Hart. Cheryl is naturally the girlly-girl that Gracie has rejected from her own psyche. If you use a positive Shadow figure in your story, then a threat to the Shadow can be used to put the Hero into action.

The Corrupter is a more certain option for a villain. The archetype is usually devoted to diverting the Hero from his or her positive goal. However, not every “villain” is entirely committed to that end.

Miranda in The Devil Wears PradaIn The Devil Wears Prada, Miranda seems entirely set on turning Andy into her Mini-Me, corrupting Andy’s desire to do investigative reporting. But Miranda’s “evil” lies only in her single-minded focus on her job. Her tough-minded approach hones Andrea’s skills and confidence even though Andrea is nearly corrupted by the lure of power. Miranda is only a partial example of a Corrupter at work.

Hans Gruber in Die HardHans Gruber in Die Hard is a more certain Corrupter figure. He is quite selfish in his ends, ready to sacrifice his whole team for his purposes. As John McClane takes out his men, Hans is more concerned by the loss of the manpower (and equipment) than the individuals. But Hans also doesn’t care about anyone other than the obstacles on his path.

When it comes to intentional corrupting of a broader swath of characters, look to Mr. Dark in Something Wicked This Way Comes.

Mr. Dark of Something Wicked This Way ComesCorruption, particularly of the innocent, is the entirety of Mr. Dark’s business. He blows into town with his disturbing carnival, tempting people with fulfillment of their desires, although he never quite gives what is expected. His twisted gifts are intended to leave ruins behind his passage.

Where Mr. Dark shows us an impersonal Corrupter, Shakespeare’s Iago in Othello is very personal about his villainy.

Iago corrupts OthelloThwarted ambition provides the motivation for Iago’s actions. Storytellers do need to remember that their villains do have reasons for their actions, whether they are revealed to the audience or not. Iago gets close to the other characters, by presenting himself as being completely trustworthy. He then uses that trust against everyone he wants to destroy. He lies to Othello and to Desdemona, corrupting their relationship to the point of driving Othello to murder his love.

When it comes to creating a villain for your story, you have a wide range of possibilities. Shape your villain to the purpose you have for your Hero. If you want to show an ideal type of hero like Harry Potter, chosing a negative Shadow like Voldemort will create the clearest picture. For a story of trust betrayed as in Othello, a Corrupter like Iago fits the bill. But whatever you do, try to go deeper than the two dimensions of Snidely Whiplash.

UPDATE:

My friend Sean Taylor on his own blog about writing has posted RIGHT HERE about villains as well. You need to check out his insights too!

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