Dexter or Sinister

I recently got into a conversation with someone about the show Dexter. The gentleman I was talking with is a fan of the show and reacted intensely to my criticism of the show. I should explain the context for this discussion: we were in a fellowship of Christians who work in the entertainment business. So, there was an expectation of agreement on certain standards of judgment. But what happened in the conversation ran counter to that.

Dexter at work

 

My criticism of Dexter is grounded on the nature of the series premise. Everything else about the show grows from the premise. This is, actually, the essence of formal logic: the truth or validity of the whole logical argument depends entirely on the validity of the elements of the premise. If any of the elements of the premise are false, in logic, the rest of the argument cannot be valid. It’s a matter of equations: one false note contaminates the whole.

So, with that in mind, back to the discussion of Dexter.

My friend protested my criticism of Dexter [which I’ve written about HERE] on the grounds that I have not watched the show regularly. The fact that I was focusing on the nature of the premise itself didn’t seem to register as significant, at least with him.

He felt that there were justifications for a series about a psychopathic serial killer, who supposedly only kills those who “deserve it.” He said such a series could show the audience what the “bad side” is like — all the precautions that Dexter (who works for the police as a forensic blood spatter expert) has to take to prevent his own capture. A second reason he put forward is “just to entertain.”

So the question then becomes, “What is entertainment?”

Dexter at work

We seek entertainment, particularly in stories, as a way of reflecting upon our human nature. Each creator, whether writer, visual artist, or musician, can show us something fresh about the experience of being human. We like encountering stories that take us into new human territory.

So that brings us back to Dexter: what do we get from an on-going series about a serial killer?

Well, someone could point to stories with Tragic Heroes: heroes who have made wrong choices and thus have their lives collapse around them. Oedipus is the classic example of such a hero: he kills a man in a fit of anger, not knowing it was his own father, and then marries the widow, having children with his own mother. But is Dexter like that? No, we’re told that he was apparently born psychopathic, so this isn’t a case of an otherwise good man who has made dire mistakes unknowingly.

What about Anti-Heroes, then? An Anti-Hero openly sets himself against socialization, he isolates himself from the social norm. The very nature of his alienation from standard human behavior fascinates us, when we encoutner it in stories. When we encounter it in real life, well, so long as the person doesn’t break the law, we tend to leave them alone. But is this Dexter? No. He supposedly engages in society in normal fashion, actually working among normal people and making attempts at “normal” relationships.

So what is this?

We are presented with a series wherein the main character regularly commits murder. In spite of the fact that the premise of the series says that all the victims deserve to die, we are still obliged to invest in the success of a serial killer. Week after week, the audience invests in the expectation that Dexter will find his victim, kill his victim, and not get caught. Dexter is an unsupervised judge, jury, and executioner.

He is a psychopath.

Dexter is a psychopath

In the conversation with my friend, he offered as a palative quality that Dexter has struggles with his nature, that he knows his choices are wrong, but by sticking to his “Code,” that somehow redeems his actions. Or, secondarily, that Dexter likes children and is concerned that his own son not grow up to be a creature like himself.

And here begins the problem. The presentation of the character of Dexter is a lie about the nature of what it means to be a psychopath.

Psychopaths don’t care about others. They are disconnected from other human beings. They may be aware of the norms of human nature, they may even comply with many of the laws, but they don’t really care about them. And certainly, they labor to avoid punishment for any infraction of the social norms. But they have no emotions for others.

A psychopath is not going to care about justice for others. A psychopath is a completely self-centered personality. A psychopath may indeed like children, but they do so because the children are regarded as possessions over which the psychopath has control. Children are favored so long as they are controlable. What the child might become is irrelevant to the psychopath.

That is the truth of the human nature of a psychopath.

The truth about ordinary humans is that acts such as those that Dexter commits create great disturbances in the human psyche. If the person continues to murder, who the target is becomes less and less important. Such a person, no matter the cause they start with, if he or she continues to kill becomes desensitized to the effect on the victim. This is, in fact, a danger that combat soldiers have to deal with. So Dexter, with his “struggles” about his killings, does not ring true on either the personal emotive level or the consequences to himself.

My friend the Dexter fan contended that Dexter does feel remorse for his actions. But if this were genuine, the remorse combined with continued killing would make him crazy: he would either turn himself in or kill himself. That is human nature.

Dexter or sinister

 

Basically, Dexter is a show that does not tell us anything true about human nature.

So what makes it compell an audience to return?

Good writing (as in well-crafted writing), high production values, and excellent acting performances.

But there is another factor. I call it emotional pornography.

Pornography is a type of “entertainment” that presents us with unrealistic standards and situations. Sexual pornogrphy focuses both on unrealistic representations of physical beauty (male and female) and unrealistic presentations of intimate interactions: physical pleasure only, disconnected from our emotional engagement with others. Emotional pornography does the same thing: it allows us to indulge in a fantasy of action without realistic conseequences. In this case, a character repeatedly murders others without it having a genuine effect on his psyche (or on his continued ability to evade capture by law enforcement)

In Dexter this type of storytelling invites the audience to identify with a character who slaughters without genuine remorse and who can successfully defy the guardians of our social standards.

I call that rather sinister storytelling. The storytellers have lied about human nature so well that the audience is sucked in, and finds ways to justify their continued adherence to the story. The explanations for why they call it “good” become complicated and entangled. They can’t really say they like the character and want to be like him, nor can they say they are fascinated by watching someone struggle with the consequences of his actions (which is where Tony Soprano would fit in on the scale — a man who is certainly suffering – to a degree – as a consequence of his actions). Nobody wants to say flat out: “Dexter gets to do evil and get away with it, and I get a kick out of watching that.”

But that is what is really happening with the audience of the show.

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Max Adams and her New Edition

Max AdamsI got to know Max Adams online back in the days of the GEnie Message Boards service. The film version of her script for Excess Baggage was just coming out, and so I went to the film because Max herself is sharp, witty and a great storyteller. Let’s just say the film wasn’t everything she hoped it would be – that’s the fate of collaborative (or even, community) storytelling.

She put out The Screenwriter’s Survival Guide, and collector of books on screenwriting – or any writing – that I am, I got a copy. Did I mention she’s sharp, witty and a great storyteller? The book is too. Max breathes life into the hard facts about being a screenwriter in Hollywood, punctuating the substance with juicy vignettes of life in Hollywood – including adventures with her trash bins.

When I’m dealing with aspiring screenwriters who have gotten past the “What is format and why is it important?” stage, I would frequently recommend Max’s book to them.

The book came out in 2001.

But now Max is putting out a NEW EDITION of this valuable book. This is advance word for you! Dig the pennies out of the sofa, raid the collection jar, set aside the stray bills, if you are a screenwriter you will want this book. If you are a novice in the Hollywood game, reading Max’s insights will prepare you to play with savvy. If you are experienced in making the rounds, you’ll just plain enjoy the way she delivers the information. She is That Good.

Screenwriter and scripts

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Your Outlook Is Important

I recently finished rereading The War of Art by Steven Pressfield. I’d first gotten it a couple of years ago on the recommendation of a friend, and enjoyed it at that time. But not long ago, I was doing tidying-up and it surfaced again as I was moving some books. I thought, “Well, why not reread it?” So I did, and I’m glad I did. It has reinspired me about my own work.

Much of what Pressfield has to say addresses the way creative people resist their own creative impulses — everything we let get in the way of “doing our job.” It is so much worth reading and rereading that I need to post a review of the book with my other reviews of books on writing.

A writer at work

But in the meantime, I want to quote the last page of this book – to inspire, encourage (and maybe scold for procrastination) myself and anyone else engaged in creative endeavors.

The Artist’s Life

Are you a born writer? Were you put on earth to be a painter, a scientist, an apostle of peace? In the end the question can only be answered by action.

Do it or don’t do it.

It may help to think of it this way. If you were meant to cure cancer or write a symphony or crack cold fusion and you don’t do it, you not only hurt yourself, even destroy yourself. You hurt your children. You hurt me. You hurt the planet.

You shame the angels who watch over you and you spite the Almighty, who created you and only you with your unique gifts, for the sole purpose of nudging the human race one millimeter farther along its path back to God.

Creative work is not a selfish act or a bid for attention on the part of the actor. It’s a gift to the world and every being in it. Don’t cheat us of your contribution. Give us what you’ve got.

(Page 165)

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Of course, the expectation is that we will all work hard to make our art (in whatever form it takes) the very best it can possibly be.  Turning out shoddy work would be as shaming to the Almight as turning out no work. But I think all creative people do need the reminder from time to time, that nobody else looks at the world exactly the way each of us does. If we don’t share what we see, we do diminish the world around us.

So… celebrate your vision, do your work, share it with others.

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What Makes For a “Hero”?

A conversation I had last weekend (after a Bible study, to put it in context) about the series Dexter has given me some food for thought. I am, in fact, preparing a much longer post about those thoughts for the near future. But first, I wanted to review some things I had written on the topic a couple of years ago.

THIS POST ON LIVEJOURNAL was written two years ago, after the San Diego Comic Con. It was sparked by the methods Showtime was using to advertise their shows during the convention. Showtime is very aggressive about this promotion each year, from billboards throughout the city to the advertisements on the shuttle buses, down to providing the lanyards for attendee badges (usually proclaiming Dexter on them). They know an important captive audience when they see one, and they go all out to get attendees’ attention to their shows.

Anyway, the point of this post is the conversation I had last weekend. The issue of what makes for a “hero” does feed into the second matter I’m mulling over. We invest in “heroes”. Now, there’ve been various series done for television that feature dubious characters as the main character — The Sopranos or The Shield for instance. But what do we get out of being absorbed with these characters? That’s what I’m considering.

In the meantime, you have the link to my earlier thoughts. I’d be interested in anyone’s reactions. After all, this blog is about writing and telling stories, and each point of view has something to add.

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Storytelling Without Subtext

Recently, just for kicks, I watched the DVD set for the first season of the 1980s show Beauty and the Beast. If you are unfamiliar with it, it takes the traditional fairy tale element of a lost beauty and a man trapped in the form of a beast and rearranges some things.

Vincent of Beauty and the Beast

In the series, Catherine Chandler lives in a tower apartment, leading a life as a bored socialite who has chosen to work as an investigator for the D.A.’s office (she’s a lawyer).

Catherine of Beauty and the Beast

Her “beast,” Vincent, lives deep under New York City in tunnels and spaces the city has forgotten, with other fugitives from the surface world. But Vincent is no ordinary man. He is a strange human-lionine hybrid, with a mysterious origin not even he knows. He is inescapably a beast, with no spell-breaker for his future that will release him from his alienation from mankind.

Against this set-up, the pair develop a strong, empathic bond when Vincent rescues Catherine from a vicious assault. The stories are about events in Catherine’s world or Vincent’s and how the pair work as a bonded team to resolve the current issue.

All well and good. But this show (or this season of it, at least) is written without a single drop of subtext. Everyone says exactly what they are feeling or thinking. Catherine expresses her love for Vincent and her anguish at the impossible relationship. (Unlike a science fiction show were cross-species relationships may be plentiful, this one is presented as unworkable — somehow.) Vincent moons about the depth of feeling that has come to him from knowing Catherine. Father (so called because he acts as such to the tunnel dwellers and to Vincent) disapproves of the relationship, protective of Vincent and concerned that Catherine will reveal their secret dwelling places.

The show was popular at the time. Ron Perlman was wonderful as Vincent, under an incredible amount of prosthetic make-up. Linda Hamilton conveyed a special mix of appealing vulnerability and steely determination. The quality of the casting made the lack of subtext less damaging to the whole.

But it never felt quite real because of the lack of subtext. It definitely felt like a fairy tale. Earnest declarations filled each episode, because they weren’t going to “waste” time leaving anything to doubt. Given the blatant presentation of Vincent’s nature, it was perhaps necessary to go the direct route. The series would have been too slow if Catherine’s attraction and response to Vincent was not clear from the beginning.

Catherine & Vincet of Beauty and the Beast

But looked at from the present, there is a definite stiltedness to the series. It still has its charms, primarily in the performances of the principal actors. But it is definitely quaint.

The new Beauty and the Beast

It was after I had watched the full season of the original series that I learned the CW would be launching a rebooted version this fall. In the new version, Catherine Chandler, now called “Cat” (we’re apparently not getting too far from lack of subtext!) is a homicide detective, and Vincent is a doctor and “military experiment gone awry.” He still lives in hiding, but his “beastly” nature now manifests only when he’s enraged (shades of The Hulk!)

The new premise has possibilities, but it is quite evident that the soft, romantic fairy tale atmosphere of the original show will not be part of the reboot.

Considering these two versions of the show has led me to muse on the nature of subtext in storytelling and its appeal. Certainly, in real life, it is unusual for us to be entirely straightforward. It isn’t a question of being dishonest as much as it is of being self-protective and cautious. We approach things indirectly very often, because we are uncertain what sort of response we might get. So, when characters in stories are straightforward and honest, it’s usually harder for us to get a grasp on them.

Using subtext allows us to fill out the textures of a character’s personality. Say a character does not want to talk about love: this creates a subtext about the reasons why the reluctance exists. Maybe there is a really bad relationship in the past, and the character tries to hide a broken heart (think Rick in Casablanca ).

Rick and Elsa in Casablanca

Or perhaps the character doesn’t want to talk about love because of a strong living relationship that must be kept secret to protect both parties (almost any story of forbidden love). We as the audience become intrigued by what is not said and why. It plugs us into the character more securely than if we were simply told why.

If you use subtext to enrich your storytelling, be sure that the object of the unspoken discussion is always clear to the audience.

Catherine and Vincent of Beauty and the Beast

If Vincent and Catherine never spoke of their feelings for each other (in the original series), it would have been evident to the audience in how they responded to each other and because it was the one unvoiced topic of conversation.

Let the audience fill in the unspoken space: if you’ve handled subtext correctly, the “dialogue” the audience provides will be on the mark.

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