Mythopoesis: Naming

[mythopoesis: the making of myths or fantasy]

Naming is a blessingThere is some magic that lies in names which gives one a deep sense of satisfaction. A name can be called a label of identity, for it helps in some fashion to describe its possessor. In many folklore traditions, names have power. Even the seemingly ordinary name might carry a weight of significance. Any Sub-Creator should be aware of these points when he begins the process of naming his creatures, for the magic of names may reach up and entangle him in unforeseen problems and possibilities.

In The Language of the Night (G.P. Putnam’s Sons, 1979), Ursula K. LeGuin mentions the process of naming while discussing her Earthsea books:

For me, as for the wizards, to know the name of an island or a character is to know the island or the person. Usually the name comes of itself, but sometimes one must be very careful: as I was with the protagonist, whose true name is Ged. I worked (in collaboration with a wizard named Ogion) for a long time trying to “listen for” his name, and making certain it really was his name …. If the name had been wrong the character would have been wrong – misbegotten, misunderstood.

A Man who read the ms, for Parnassus though “Ged” was meant to suggest “God”. That shook me badly. I considered changing the name in case there were other such ingenious minds waiting to pounce. But I couldn’t do so. The fellow’s name was Ged and no two ways about it. (p. 52)

In these two paragraphs, LeGuin brings out four points about the process of naming: the relationship between knowing a character’s name and knowing the character, that proper names are gained by careful attention or “listening”, that a reader can easily have a mistaken assumption as to the name’s “meaning”, and that a character will often insist on keeping his proper name. Each of these points is something a Sub-Creator ought to consider when he begins to assign names to both people and places.

In folklore there are many references to magic attached to names. Sometimes it is said that knowing the true name of a person or object gives one power over that person or object. In a sense this is true for the Sub-Creator, for as long as a character is known to the author only as “the Hero who carries the Green Sword and kills the Water Dragon”, not much will be known about him. The moment the character acquires a name, however, the author may discover any number of things about the character.

The Sub-Creator must be careful about bestowing a name upon a character. The Proper Name can be a great source of satisfaction, but it cannot simply be contrived. There are many things which can affect the choice of names, but none of them are idle. In a letter printed in The Letters of J.R.R. Tolkien (Houghton Mifflin, 1981), Tolkien observed “I do not think that an inventor catches noises out of the air” (p. 375). There is usually some sort of appeal in the name for the author. LeGuin observes of the Earthsea names that

… three small islands are named for my children, their baby names …. None of the other names “means” anything that I know of, though their sounds is more or less meaningful to me. (LN, p. 51)

Indeed, the call of “meaning” in names is very powerful, and many readers pursue this elusive butterfly far afield from the Sub-Creator’s world. Many an author has had to endure mistaken assumptions similar to that expressed by LeGuin’s reader. Tolkien, in another letter, points out the problem for the author on this matter.

Investigators, indeed, seem mostly confused in mind between (a) the meaning of names within, and appropriate to, my story and belonging to a fictional ‘historic’ construction, and (b) the origins or sources in my mind, exterior to the story, of the forms of these names. As to (1) they are of course given sufficient information, though they often neglect what is provided. (LT, p. 380, emphasis Tolkien’s)

Yet, admittedly, readers will continue to pursue the “meaning” of names and there is little an author can do about the situation, aside from flat out stating what the name meant to him.

It is perhaps this underlying but unexplainable “meaning” hiding in the name which occasionally surprised the Sub-Creator. As LeGuin observes, when she contemplated changing Ged’s name, she found it impossible. Not only was it the Proper Name, but the character had laid claim to it. The Sub-Creator can easily find himself dealing with characters who refuse to give up their Proper Names, but also with characters who will refuse to accept or acknowledge ill-chosen names.

In Genesis, Adam is given the challenge and delight of naming the creatures of the world, but we are given no stories of how the names came to him nor how long it took him to complete the naming process. For the Sub-Creator, the bestowing of names echoes that Edenic chore, but roughly and uneasily. In one case the author may say “But of course his name is Ap l’Don!”, while in another, a character may maintain a lengthy, shadowy elusiveness until the author trips over the name one day. Either way, when the author learns a character’s name, it is for him a bit like being personally introduced to a new friend.

“What’s in a name?” Juliet asked the night. She might think it a small matter, a mere few sounds. But Shakespeare knew what hid in names. It is after all the weight of two family names, their power and poison, which kills the young lovers. Any Sub-Creator would do well to remember that.

first published in Mythlore 38, 1984) (revised 2006)

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Everyone is on a Journey

A lot has been written about the Hero’s Journey.  Even I have tossed in my two cents worth on the matter.  It can be very, very handy for any writer to know the shape of the Hero’s Journey.  But many writers have gotten stuck on a single model, Chris Vogler’s redaction of Joseph Campbell’s outline.   I’m not saying that it is a bad model, for it isn’t.  But the problem of being stuck on it is that the Vogler/Campbell outline is not the only one available.

Story heroes are on journeys.

Obviously, the Hero of the story is on a journey.

It is entirely possible for a writer to be on fire for his story, and struggling to get his plot to “fit” the Hero’s Journey outline that he knows — only to dispair because his story doesn’t want to go that way.  It’s possible for that frustratd writer to think that he is wrong about his story (even though he is still jazzed by it, in the back of his head).  So he stops.

Now, it’s my feeling that no writer should give up on a story that excites him.  It may be a mess, plot-wise, and need work.  But no writer should feel she has to give up on something just because it doesn’t fit one outline.  So, that’s why I felt it important in The Scribbler’s Guide to the Land of Myth to mention some of the principal variations of the Hero’s Journey that I have encountered over the years.  The different outlines often have elements not included in the Vogler/Campbell model.  But every writer should also remember that these things are not cut in stone: they are very flexible, and you can move things around a bit, to suit your own story.  After all, you are the storyteller.

Getting comfortable with the Journey your Hero is on is only the first step, however.  If you want to add depth to your story, and to help the other characters take on substance, you need to remember that the Hero is not the only character actually going on a “journey” in your story.  The villain is pretty sure he’s the Hero of his own life.  And your love interest or B Story sidekick is also making a journey.  Do you know the shapes of their Journeys?

Supporting characters are on journeys too.

The Supporting Characters are on journeys too —
and not necessarily the same one as the Hero

This brings us to another reason why there is an advantage in knowing multiple versions of the Hero’s Journey.  Your three principal characters do not have to be traveling according to the same pattern.  In fact, it can be very interesting if they are not.  Nor does everyone’s Journey have to start at the same point.  For instance, your villain’s journey may begin well before the point where you want to start the story.  This could turn into what Blake Snyder called Act Zero material.  The Journey for your B Story character may not be so complicated.

The mechanics of coordinating the different Journeys will reveal how well you understand your plot.  A villain’s high point may be your Hero’s darkest moment, or it may just be one of the trials and tests the Hero meets.  It’s your story.  You decide.  But at this point, index cards or a computer program that has a similar function, where you can shuffle and mix individual story beats can be a big help.

Know the villain's journey.

Know the shape of the Villain’s journey too!

And there can be great satisfaction in looking at the meshed outline, where you can clearly see where each charcter is on his or her particular Journey.  When you realize you know exactly what the villain wanted as his victory and what is a set-back for him; when you know just what the B Story character’s Journey is, at that point your story becomes more solid and deeper.

Everyone is on a Journey.  Everyone has a goal.  They may not all be met by the events in your story.  But when you start constructing things this way, you will discover that it is very useful.

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Mythopoesis: History

[mythopoesis: the making of myths or fantasy]

History lies in the documentsHuman beings are born in time, live in time and, in time die. The whole of our lives is spent with the flow of time, and so it is only natural that we tend to think of the history of things in a straight chronological and sequential order. Yet, when it comes to the matter of mythopoesis, if we remain locked in such habits of thought, we shall become lost. The history of a fantasy world rarely comes to its author in a chronological fashion: that is, the author rarely begins at the beginning and goes on to the end. He usually begins, like Tolkien’s Niggle, with a single leaf, and in going on, finds that there are branches, other leaves, trunk and roots to be accounted for.

When considering the matter of the “internal history” of fantasy worlds, one finds that there are three types of worlds. The first is the Single Story World, where the fantasy world was created for the particular story being told. The history that the reader learns is included because it is significant to the story being told. Of course, the author may take more than one volume to tell his story, but it is one story. The second type of world is the Multi-Story World, which was originally conceived by the author as holding more than one story. Many of these worlds, it is true, are created for the purpose of a string of stories about one particular character, like Conan, but it is also the type of world Tolkien made. The third type is the World Revisited. This is a fantasy world which was originally a Single Story world, but which, because of readers’ demands or affection for it on the part of the author, the author re-enters with a new story.

For the Sub-Creator, each of these three types of worlds presents different problems in the making of their history. The Single Story World is the simplest situation, for if the history of the world enters the story at all, it is significant to the story line. The World Revisited is the most awkward, for the author has to be careful in opening out the history, in order that he not introduce impossible inconsistencies or change the significance of previously established “history.” The Multi-Story World is the most complex, for the Sub-Creator is really involved in discovering the world.

Ursula K. LeGuin in The Language of the Night (G.P. Putnam’s Sons, 1979) uses just that word: “discovering.” And “exploring.” “I am not an engineer, but an explorer. I discovered Earthsea” (p. 50). But in mythopoesis, discovery is only rarely a chronological (in the fantasy world’s reference) process. Various story ideas may randomly appear to the author anywhere along his world’s time-line. Additionally, new stories grow out of older (in the author’s mind) stories, like leaves appearing on the branches of a sapling.

On top of this haphazard chronology, the Sub-Creator has to deal with the fact that stories may change shape under his hands. Walter Hooper in Past Watchful Dragons (Collier Books, 1979) observes this in Lewis’s notebooks for the Narnia tales:

Although (Lewis’s notebooks) don’t tell us very much, there is nevertheless sufficient to give us an idea of the “deliberate inventing” that was sometimes necessary when his mental “pictures” did not group themselves into a complete tale. It is also obvious that his first pictures were sometimes supplanted by others, and that pictures that were not used in one story often found a place in some other. (PWD, p. 45-46)

Christopher Tolkien in an editorial note in Unfinished Tales (Houghton Mifflin, 1980) in the section on Aldarion and Erendis makes a related observation about this process:

From the point where Aldarion read the letter from Erendis, refusing to return to Armenelos, the story can only be traced in glimpses and snatches, from notes and jottings: and even those do not constitute the fragments of a wholly consistent story, being composed at different times and often at odds with themselves. (UT, p. 205)

If the author is aware of which type of world he is creating, handling its “history” becomes a slightly easier chore. But only “slightly” easier, for story-ideas, like a band of mischievous monkeys, are likely to bounce up and down and hop from one place to another, while the author scrambles to get them into their proper places.

An author, additionally, needs to be “in tune” with his fantasy world, so that he can tell when a story (or “historical”) idea has finally settled down into the proper shape.

These, then, are the two forces a Sub-Creator has to deal with while forming the history of his fantasy world: the non-chronological fashion in which story ideas present themselves, and the fact that the story may change shape (sometimes drastically) under his hands. Yet even being aware that this is often how the mythopoeic process works will not save the Sub-Creator from a degree of frustration. His creatures may not have free will such as we possess, but they do often have an adamant determination to be self-consistent that can border on the willful. If the Sub-Creator pays attention to his creatures he may even find the course of the history which he has mapped out being changed by some willful hero or heroine in one of his stories.

The whole process of creating a history is a slippery one, and should be approached with care. One slip, and the creatures will be leading the Sub-Creator – not necessarily in a bad manner, but certainly in an unexpected one.

(originally in Mythlore 37, Winter 1984; revised 2006)

 



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Inspiration From the Search Strings

(Originally posted on LiveJournal)

I’ve mentioned in a couple of previous entries how I sometimes check the search strings that bring people to my website. It’s a rather interesting activity, that I don’t do often enough. I stopped checking my website stats frequently, because at present, once I get past what seems to be terrific numbers, I realize that the high number of hits are the spam bots and search engine spiders. I started realizing this, when I noticed that the pages that got the highest number of hits (hundreds of them), were the registration pages for my message board and the Word Press blogs connected with my sites. *sigh*

Searching on the road

Once I ignore all the hits for the message board and blogs, I average about 48 visitors a month. Which all things considered isn’t really bad, considering I don’t really push for traffic much. Once I get myself back into gear and update it (it has needed an update for some time), and keep updating it with new material, I might do that. In the meantime, like I said, it’s fun to see how “strangers” got there.

A lot of these strings deal with the hero’s quest, or the nature of the hero. Some of them deal with heroines — interesting that there is still the consideration of the female figure as the non-active, or somehow distinct in nature from the hero.I have, of course, commented on that point before.

There are some good springboards in the search strings, that I will flesh out either here. But the one that caught my attention for today was the question of “What makes one a hero or heroine in our culture?”

(I do get the impression that some of the search strings come from homework assignments, and the students are looking for things that can give them a clue on which way to jump. But they’re still interesting.)

What does make one a hero in our culture these days? There is the obvious aspect of delivering groups of people to safety in dangerous circumstances — like the pilot who landed his commercial airplane in the Hudson River without loss of life to any of the passengers. So, I guess we could say that the ability to cope with sudden disaster is one quality that makes for a hero in our culture. What else? A concern for others over one’s own self-preservation. Now, memories of the First Responders who rushed into the World Trade Center and did everything they could to get as many people out of the towers as they possibly could, that was definitely putting others before one’s own survival. How about quick wits and quick reactions? (I can think of occasions where, though they might be ideal qualities, they aren’t necessary.)

When it comes down to it, I don’t think the qualities that make for a hero have changed all that much down the ages. It’s more to the point that I don’t think we see quite as many occasions for heroism these days – at least not in the sense that an “unknown” jumps into the breach. We have “profressionally trained heroes” in our police officers and firemen. (Which is not to say that there are not some bad apples in the ranks.) Have we come to rely on them so much, that we no longer think that a true hero can be anyone?

There are stories of social disengagement often enough these days, of people who stand by when something dire is happening, who just watch but do not engage. Does our Observer Society lead us to consider “heroes” to be “someone other than me”? Have we really reached a point where we think heroism calls for special qualities that only some people have?

Points for mulling over — what do you think?

Comments

sartorias – Aug. 24th, 2009

I think it’s more complicated than that . . .

will have to update my own links–looks like my post that mentioned the book is way down in my own LJ and gets few visitors any more.

scribblerworks – Aug. 24th, 2009

Oh, I agree it’s complicated. But worth looking at.

The search string set off a train of thought, and I haven’t really reached any conclusions on it yet. It’s just that it wouldn’t have occured to me that heroism might be different now (in character, at least) than in the past. So, I’d be interested in some reactions. 🙂

nthdraft – Aug. 25th, 2009

um yeah 🙂 the hero(ine)’s journey stuff is kind of why I friended you (well that and I like what you post on Colleen Doran’s blog). “what makes a hero” is one of the side themes of my current project.

scribblerworks – Aug. 25th, 2009

And happy to have you here! (Readers are always good. 😉 )

Because the search strings for stuff on “heroines” keep coming up, I’ve been thinking about what to write regarding it. There are a number of things I could do. I’ll have to reread my posts here, and my old Mythopoesis column first. And then I think I’ll write up a paper/article to post on the website, since if I do a serious job, it’s likely to be longer than I like for an LJ post.

I did write a paper dealing with the matter of the traditional heroine in The Silmarillion years ago, but… well, I haven’t wanted to put any of my Tolkien scholarship online. Mainly because I think I could make a book of it eventually, and putting it online would undercut that.

But doing something on the traditional heroine in other stories, I could do that. It would be practice for next year’s Mythcon — the theme for that is “War in Heaven”, and I feel sure I can get at least one paper idea out of that concept! 😀

Ah! Recreational scholarship! Haven’t done that in a while.

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Burning Jeopardy

One of the many things I talk about in The Scribbler’s Guide to the Land of Myth deals with franchise storytelling.  This can cover comic book series, sets of movies, television shows or a string of novels.  Most such creations are built on what I call the “Incidental Jeopardy” context: that means that in any specific story, your main character (upon whom the franchise depends) has a 50/50 chance of failing to meet his or her goal.  But some other series get set up where the main character is driven by some burning goal.  I call this the “Constant Jeopardy Syndrome,” where the set up is such that if the main character ever reaches his goal or solves the Big Problem of his life, the series ends.

In the book, I discuss the problems encountered with the Constant Jeopardy Syndrome, especially that involved in keeping the characters emotionally realistic.  The point is that when over a long span of time a character fails to solve the Main Problem in his life, he tends to lose emotional credibility, especially if the constant failure doesn’t seem to faze him.

Cable’s USA show Burn Notice is constructed on a Constant Jeopardy Syndrome: Michael Westen used to be a spy and got burned — this means he has been black-listed and rendered an official non-person, no bank accounts, no official records (driver’s license or passport).  The series deals with his attempts to find out who burned him, why, and his getting himself reinstated.  (And if he ever achieves all of these, it’s likely the show would end.)

Since Michael is presented from the beginning as being one of the very best at his job, if he did not make some progress in his quest to solve his Big Problem, we would quickly lose interest.  Fortunately, the series creator and writers address this by giving Michael progressive stages of existence (professional and personal problems) to deal with.

One of the first obstacles he has to face is that he has been dropped into his hometown of Miami, Florida, where he has to deal with his mother.

Burn Notice's Maddy - Michael's motherMadeline Westen is expert at wielding emotional blackmail over Michael — which works because at rock bottom, Michael is a good guy and does love his mother.  Madeline also serves to show that although Michael may be officially a non-person, he also needs to relearn how to be a real person, with a real (ie, emotional) life.

Madeline is assisted in this by the presence of Fiona — the love of Michael’s life.

Michael and FionaFiona’s “official” position is “not his girlfriend.”  Except that she is his ideal partner.  The ups and downs of their relationship ring true, for they are dealing with real issues: the nature of Michael’s old job, what that job requires of his character, how to accommodate another person deeply into your life.

The two characters are alternately obstacles and assistants in Michael’s hunt for information and reinstatement.

First after being burned, he was watched by FBI minders.  He upped the stakes on them, to the point where a special overseer was assigned to keep Michael subdued.

Michael and his overseerIt’s a new problem in Michael’s way, which he removes over the course of a few episodes by creating the appearance that the overseer has been compromised.  This leads to the mysterious organization that burned him revealing itself slightly.

The series very carefully continues revealing obstacles for Michael to overcome.  Each step forward also reveals more of his own character to Michael.  First, he seeks to put a face to his new “manager”, Carla, and in fact draws her out to revealing herself.

Michael and CarlaShe tells him she helped burn him in order to recruit him to the secret organization she serves.  She sets Victor to “manage” Michael.

Victor is a negative version of MichaelVictor is like Michael (ie, burned), “but with rabies” (according to Sam Axe, Michael’s friend and sidekick).  Michael transforms Victor from opponent to ally and the pair remove Carla, forcing the organization’s Management to reveal himself.  Michael is offered better conditions in the organization, under the threat of removal of their protections (from enemies and authorities).

Michael opts to reject the protection and the job.  The new set of obstacles in his way toward reinstatement include dealing with a police detective who has suspicions that Michael is behind some unusual occurances in town.

The detective after Michael

 

 

 

Michael succeeds in turning her from opponent to an at least hands-off observer.  So the next obstacle steps up.  “The Devil” (Strickler) offers Michael assistance at reinstatement, in exchange for Michael working for him.

Michael and Strickler

This is too much for Fiona, who questions what this deal will do to Michael’s character.  This emotional “real person” challenge conflicts with Michael’s desire to be an “official person” again.

Every time Michael progresses closer to his goal, either a new obstacle gets in his way, or the goal becomes slightly redefined and moved.  The writers avoid all the traps of the Constant Jeopardy Syndrome: failure to make any progress toward the goal and/or lack of emotional reality.  The audience is satisfied by the proof that Michael is indeed as competent as claimed (he makes progress), and also maintains a realistic emotional response to both his successes and failures.  The show is a fine example of how to handle the Constant Jeopardy Syndrome.

[I was going to write about Burn Notice in regard to other motifs, but I may come back to them later.]

(Pictures and characters are property of Fox Television and Fuse Entertainment.)

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